If Only I Had Told Her

This is not the first book but it's the first one that I read in this series. I am thinking that was not a mistake. I have always enjoyed reading YA fiction from the male point of view, probably because that is so different from a woman's point of view. And Finneas was such a lovable character - an all around good guy who found himself caught in a love triangle of his own making. Those are also my favorite romances to read because young love is often confusing and felt so deeply. It can be like Romeo and Juliet and sometimes be downright tragic at times. The writing style is one of the hardest to do well, and that is present tense. But it really does make you feel like you are there in the moment as the action is happening. This story gripped me emotionally and kept me reading. I didn't want to stop. The way it was written helped me grieve with the characters. If felt torn the same way that Finneas did when it came to his lifelong love for Autumn. That was so well done, as was the emotional punch in the gut I felt at the end of the first point of view. I cried. Then it deepened even more when in Jack's POV. He had to somehow move on in life without his best friend. I loved getting to know his heart. The regrets, the pain, the joy and the stages of grief were so well done. Then there was Autumn's point of view, which would more closely resemble my own if I were to find myself in her situation. I felt like I knew these characters - like they were real people. They were so complex and three dimensional. As an author myself, I feel like this deep point of view gave me a new and fresh perspective on developing emotion in scenes. I've always enjoyed developing characters, but this was somehow deeper the way it was done. It's an approach to writing that I am looking forward to developing while writing my own novels. One last thought. I didn't care much for the cursing, but it wasn't overly done. And honestly, most guys think and talk like that in the real world, so the point of view made sense. It added to their emotion in the way it was expressed so that was also well done. The author did not focus on what happens to someone after they die. In fact, she didn't mention the afterlife at all. What she did do was show how a person's life can make an impact on the lives of other people who are still living, and in that sense, they will live on despite having died. The characters found themselves often asking what Finn would want as if he was still there, and in doing so, they were honoring his memory. That was a perspective I had not considered before and I found it to be healing.

Enjoyed the first book and this one was good as well.

Arrived only 1 day after purchasing cover is clean and beautiful!!!! cant wait to give my cousin this book

I did not read "if he had been with me" as I didn't know this was part of a collection so my review is just based on having read this as a standalone book. Pros: the writing was great. Easy to read and descriptive. The story is told from the points of view of three different people and I feel like the writing was a little different and tailored to each character to match the way they think and the things they say. The different perspectives were interesting to read and I liked that it wasn't three views in the same timeline, it was three different timelines, each one picking up where the previous one left off. Cons: a bit boring honestly. My favorite was the first third of the book that was told from Finn's perspective. It had the most interesting storyline and I was excited to see what came next. The next two thirds of the book were a little boring and kind of dragged. There wasn't much of a plot, just characters coping with what happened at the end of Finn's section of the book. Overall an easy read and interesting enough. Not sure I would recommend.

Book came in great condition. Was very excited for this sequal and I love this white cover so much.

Nice ending yoga sad situation. Fast paced. Easy quick read recommend reading book 1 first. Great characters. Highly recommend thus read

I read this book in one sitting in the middle of the night it was so addicting and scaring. I was scared about jack and finnys pov because autumns felt like home. But they were amazing. Finny was died off to soon in this book. I wanted more of him. I thought we got this book to get more of him. If this is the end of finny and autumn I am sad. Before I wasn’t sad because it felt like the end the scar was healed until you ripped the bandage off and now I’m struggling to put it back on. I want more of Finnys point of view when he was with Autumn in high school. I want more of Autumns point of view because she thinks just like me. The charterers changed Finny didn’t. Jack I’m not sure. But autumn definitely did. I don’t know if I like it for the better or worse yet. I wanted to know more about the misfits. I know no one cares about them anymore but they consumed the majority of the first book and were so close and tight knit it felt so real. I want more of how finny felt when Autumn claimed the table back after the war, how he felt after seeing the photo of him and Autumn hidden under the sock drawer, I want more. I need more. But soon I’ll think I have enough and I do. I just feel as this wasn’t the way it was supposed to be. It was the way it was mean tot be but not suppose to be and I hate that. I hate it so much. In the first book I believed that Autumn should have killed herself but after this book I was glad she didn’t and wouldn’t because of the baby. But then I realized finny would never be with the baby so what was the point. It doesn’t feel right to not have Finny alive. It doesn’t feel right to say finny is dead. I thought this book was supposed to heal me but it didn’t and I don’t think anything could. This book was the much more depressing than ‘if he had been with me’ by miles. But at least I know I am happy because autumn is happy because she has a piece of finny with her. I just always wanted autumn and finny to be happy and I guess they are now; finny watching over at autumn and his daughter.

Sehr schönes Buch… ich habe währenddessen geweint

- REVIEW IN ENGLISH AND FRENCH - 🇬🇧 English review : Simply incredible and moving at the same time! This sequel to the first volume is just magnificent and extremely touching. During the 3 parts that this book covers, we cry, we smile, we feel for Jack and Autumn and above all we cry for Finny's part. A sequel that honours its muse, simply perfect! I recommend it! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ STARS 🇫🇷 French review : Tout simplement incroyable et émouvant en même temps ! Cette suite d'un premier tome est juste magnifique et extrêmement touchante. Pendant les 3 parties que couvre ce livre, on pleure, on souris, on compatis pour Jack et Autumn et surtout on pleure pour la partie de Finny. Une suite qui fait honneur à sa muse, tout simplement parfait ! Je recommande ! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ÉTOILES

جيد

I loved this book, the describing and all of the words flowed smoothly. The love came to life in my mind. Definitely one worth a read.

Depois de ler o primeiro livro estava entusiasmada para adquirir este. Rápida leitura e bastante emotivo.